3 Reasons Why ‘All The Bright Places’ Wasn’t My Cup of Tea


All The Bright Places
by Jennifer Niven
Published by Penguin Australia 
on January 6th 2015

As soon as I saw the cover and read the quote “This is the next Fault in our Stars” I had a feeling All the Bright Places wouldn’t be my cup of tea. I should probably listen to my gut feeling more often haha. While I didn’t find All the Bright Places life-changing or soul-crushing – in fact, I found one third of the book particularly boring – I’ll admit that the last one hundred pages were rather memorable and I would highly recommend it to my friends/anyone who liked The Fault in our Stars i.e. 99% of the population but definitely not me.

The main reasons why All the Bright Places didn’t work for me

  • Couldn’t connect with the characters

This is a it’s not you it’s me thing, but I felt there was no intimacy between me as the reader and the characters I’m reading about, and that’s a very serious issue for me. If I can’t connect with the characters on any level, then there’s no point in continuing with the book.

The story is told from alternating perspectives of Finch and Violet, an approach that was executed terribly. I couldn’t distinguish between the two voices as they sounded exactly the same. On more than one occasion, I started reading a new chapter thinking it was from Violet/Finch’s perspective, only to later realise that it was actually from the other character’s POV. Violet and Finch had the same dull voice and that truly frustrated me as a reader.

  • The characters didn’t have chemistry

Violet and Finch had no chemistry, in my opinion. I realise this is probably a result of feeling disconnected from the characters and the storyline, but the fact remains: I didn’t feel any chemistry, which made it infinitely more difficult for me to root for them.

  • The constant references to dead poets and statistics

I’ve always hated poetry. I can’t wrote poetry nor can I analyse them. I’m sure there are readers out there who appreciated the references to dead poets and the death related statistics, but I wasn’t one of them. It ruined the flow of the story for me because I had no interest in the information and skipped most of it.

I considered giving up after 100 pages but forced myself to continue reading because I make it a point to always finish books that I paid for. (Otherwise I’d feel like my money was wasted) . I ended up skimming almost 260 pages until FINALLY after page 260, Mr Embryos/Finch semi-explained what was wrong with him. As soon as I discovered Finch’s possible ‘diagnosis’ – or since Finch hates labels so much, the possible explanation for his erratic and uncontrollable behaviour – I developed a newfound interest in the book. I wanted to know more about Finch and what this illness could do to a person if untreated.

As I mentioned before, the last 100 pages were extremely memorable; Finch’s condition was heartbreaking and I wished someone had noticed what he had been going through for so long. I didn’t understand how everyone just brushed off his behaviour as “it’s just Finch”, like it’s completely normal for anyone to just up and disappear for months and then come back as if nothing had happened. I didn’t understand how Finch’s older sister Kate was aware that he was away from school for months but didn’t care enough to see what wrong with him? I especially hated Finch’s mum; how could she be completely oblivious to everything that was going on under her roof?

All in all, All the Bright Places wasn’t for me but I would recommend it to all contemporary readers! I think I’ll give Jennifer Niven’s books another go sometime in the future, but I’ll be approaching them with caution and low expectations.

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Moving on from YA?

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When I was in primary school and early high school, I read anything and everything – historical fiction, crime, horror and the occasional YA. YA back then wasn’t as popular as it is now. When I was in high school, the only YA books I knew of were the Princess Diaries series, Sarah Dessen’s standalone contemporaries, Twilight and the Uglies series. I fell in love with Twilight in 2007, but it wasn’t until 2011 that I started actively reading YA. In 2011, I randomly stumbled upon Fallen by Lauren Kate and 16 year old me fell madly in love with the main character Daniel. From then on, I began to read anything that featured supernatural characters – angels, vampires, werewolves, you name it. Paranormal Romance was big back then and I was certainly satisfied. Then from 2012 onwards my reading tastes jumped to a thirst for Dystopian YA (Article 5, Shatter Me) and in 2013, my reading preferences changed to contemporary/NA. 

I started blogging in 2011 when I was 16 years old. My favourite books featured hot main leads, a damsel in distress as the main female lead (although later I realised books featuring strong, kickass females were a lot more exciting), a love triangle where it was exceedingly transparent who the girl would eventually end up with. Some of my favourite books back then were:

  • The Vampire Academy
  • The Mortal Instruments
  • The Infernal Devices
  • The Iron Fey
  • Hush Hush series
  • Twilight
  • Half- Blood series

Since 2017 I’ve noticed that I’ve become exceedingly more picky about the YA books that I decide to read. This had happened before in 2013 when I felt I had “outgrown” YA novels and turned to NA as I connected more with the characters, environment and storylines but I would always return to YA when I ran out of NA books to read. Now, it doesn’t matter if everyone on twitter is raving about a particular YA book, if the first page doesn’t instantly grab my attention then it’s game over. I’m a lot less patient with YA now; they’re either a hit or miss for me. 

On the other hand, I’m a lot more lenient in selecting non-YA books to read and certainly more patient when reading them. Even if the first chapter isn’t immediately grabbing my attention, I’m more than happy to keep reading until the end. I’ve always been a massive fan of crime fiction and psychological thrillers/suspense but had to put those genres on the backburner when I started my YA book blog. I’m glad now I have more time to dedicate to the world of mysteries, thrillers and cold-blooded killings.

I’m currently reading Halfway to the Grave and it has brought back fond memories of love my for paranormal romance. I’m hoping now I can dedicate more time to reading the likes of Stephen King, Agatha Christi, Philippa Gregory, Alison Weir and other authors I find along the way!

Review | The Possible by Tara Altebrando

Publisher: Bloomsbury Australia
Release Date: 1st June 2017 


Another twisty psychological suspense from the author of The Leaving, where a teen searches for answers about her mother’s dark history, telekinesis, and the power of will.

What if . . . no one knows the truth about you? It’s been thirteen years since Kaylee’s biological mother, Crystal, once infamous for her supposed telekinetic ability, got a life sentence for killing Kaylee’s little brother in a fit of telekinetic rage. Today, Kaylee’s living a normal life with her adoptive parents and almost never thinks of Crystal. Until a woman shows up on Kaylee’s doorstep, asking to interview her for a podcast about her mother. Was the whole telekinesis thing a hoax, or does Crystal have some kind of special powers? Is it possible that Kaylee has them, too? It would certainly explain some of the stranger things that have happened to her over the years. 

What if . . . she did the interview? Met her mother for the first time since the trial? Can her mother prove she can make things happen with her mind? Can Kaylee do the same? And what if she has been doing it, all along? As the podcast begins airing, everyone in Kaylee’s life–everyone in the country–is hearing this dark history and asking questions that even Kaylee has never dared ask herself.

The Possible is a twisty, surprising story, and an exploration of the power of our own minds, the power of will, and how our histories define us . . . or not.

The Possible had an intriguing premise, but failed dismally to deliver. The execution was horrible and the only reason I managed to finish was because the book was short and by skimming ¾ of the book, I managed to finish it in a couple of hours.

The Possible begins with Kaylee getting visited by a reporter, who wants to interview her for a podcast about her biological mum. Her biological mum, who is currently in prison for the murder of Kaylee’s brother, was once ‘famous’ for supposedly possessing telekinetic powers. The storyline essentially revolves around Kaylee investigating whether her mother’s claims of telekinetic powers are true, and simultaneously discovering whether she herself has these supernatural powers.

I’m assuming that the author intended for readers to spend the entire journey guessing whether Kaylee has powers, but I chalked up every single strange incident to coincidence – Altebrando’s storytelling wasn’t convincing enough for me to wonder whether Kaylee had supernatural powers. Her writing was too simple with a lot of “telling” rather than “showing”, and there were too many line breaks that ruined the flow of the story. Kaylee would be in a conversation with her parents, the conversation would quickly and conveniently wrap up, then the story would jump to another scene a few days later. There was no smooth transition between scenes which made it feel like the story was all over the place.

Speaking of Kaylee, it was impossible to like her. She was so self-centred and immature, I honestly would not want to be friends with her in real life. Instead of finding another date or going with friends to prom, she was under the illusion that her unattainable crush would somehow miraculously dump his current girlfriend, who she so kindly nicknamed “Princess Bubblegum”, before prom and would then somehow miraculously notice her and take her to prom even though they’ve never spoken to each other before. I’m usually fine with characters fantasising about their crush, but when they say  stuff like “Yeah, he’ll dump her before prom and then take me” and purposely orchestrate a plan to break them up, then we have a problem.

I believe this story had potential, especially since telekinesis is such an interesting topic. If only the writing was stronger and the characters were more level-headed, memorable and less like… cardboard cut-outs, I would have liked the book a lot more. The pacing could have been slower too, since it read like the author rushed to finish writing the book. All in all, this wasn’t my cup of tea.

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May Wrap Up

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May was a busy month for me. I worked 4 days a week, had multiple assessments, projects and presentations scattered throughout the month but somehow managed to finish a couple of books as well! I’m actually super proud of myself 😛


I went back to Pandora as a Mother’s Day casual and worked between 20-30 hours a week for the first 2 weeks of May. I also had 2 presentations for MA 2, a debate for Economic Analysis (where we had to talk for 15 minutes as a group without ANY notes or slides – how is that even possible?!?! Even Presidents have a whole speech laid out in front of them when they speak to the nation!), a couple of quizzes and 2 major projects due on Friday of Week 13.

I’m so glad May is over, but now I’m preparing for exams which, in my opinion is so much worse. I would choose assignments/projects over exams any day 😦


I finished:

  • A Court of Mist and Fury (re-read in preparation for ACOWAR)
    • RHYSAND ♥♥
    • Definitely my favourite book in the series!!
    • 5/5
  • A Court of Wings and Ruins
    • I had a lot of issues with it, mainly because I hate Feyre’s sisters and don’t like how they were such important characters in the story
    • 3/5
  • The Secret History of Us
    • 4/5
    • Review will be up in July – closer to the release date
  • The Lucky One
    • 4.5/5
    • Really, really enjoyed it 🙂 Especially the ending…..I was like WTF?
  • Saint Anything (in preparation for Once and For All!)
    • 5/5
    • There’s a reason why Sarah Dessen is one of my favourite authors!!
  • Eliza and her Monsters
    • 5/5!!!!!! Legit one of my favourite 2017 books


Review | Eliza and her Monsters by Francesca Zappia

Publisher: HarperCollins
Release Date: 30th May 2017 


Eighteen-year-old Eliza Mirk is the anonymous creator of Monstrous Sea, a wildly popular webcomic, but when a new boy at school tempts her to live a life offline, everything she’s worked for begins to crumble.

In the real world, Eliza Mirk is shy, weird, smart, and friendless. Online, Eliza is LadyConstellation, the anonymous creator of a popular webcomic called Monstrous Sea. With millions of followers and fans throughout the world, Eliza’s persona is popular. Eliza can’t imagine enjoying the real world as much as she loves her digital community. Then Wallace Warland transfers to her school, and Eliza begins to wonder if a life offline might be worthwhile. But when Eliza’s secret is accidentally shared with the world, everything she’s built—her story, her relationship with Wallace, and even her sanity—begins to fall apart. With pages from Eliza’s webcomic, as well as screenshots from Eliza’s online forums, this uniquely formatted book will appeal to fans of Noelle Stevenson’s Nimonaand Rainbow Rowell’s Fangirl.

Eliza and her Monsters is by far, my favourite YA book of 2017. It’s not a spur of the moment decision either – I’ve had a couple days to sit on it and yes, as of June 2017, it’s my favourite 2017 book.

Eliza is the anonymous creator of the world-famous webcomic, Monstrous Sea. For the last 3 years she has, without fail, uploaded new additions to the comic every Friday. She has constantly stressed how consistency and her top-quality work (she would never upload something that she isn’t 100% happy with) is what her fans deserve. This is a sentiment that as a book blogger, I can relate to. Back when I was more active on Shiirleyy’s Bookshelf I was pushing myself to finish at least several books a week so that I would have at least 2-3 reviews up every week. I didn’t want to disappoint the publishers who kindly sent me books, the same way Eliza never wanted to disappoint her fans. I really admire Eliza for singlehandedly creating this virtual empire that stemmed from her passion for drawing. She is a fighter, a fantastic main character but not without her flaws. I felt that Eliza was so absorbed in her online life that she neglected her family, especially her two brothers. Eliza admitted that she didn’t particularly care about her brothers’ games, which was extremely disheartening since they were siblings and her brothers cared deeply for her and knew everything about her internet fame. I am however, happy with how Eliza matured as an older sister towards the end 🙂 

I liked the representation of Eliza’s parents; her parents always thought this Monstrous Sea webcomic was simply a hobby and were supportive but never truly understood the extent of their daughter’s popularity and talent. I remember an interview I read featuring one of Australia’s most famous fashion icons, Margaret Zhang where she shared that even after almost half a decade, her parents were not aware of what she did. I think the representation of Eliza’s parents was rather accurate and while sometimes I wanted to yell at them for not making the effort to open their eyes and see how talented and successful their daughter is, I agreed with their constant nagging for Eliza to leave her room. 

The illustrations were absolutely stunning and I can’t wait to buy myself a copy to stare at all day! Whether you’re a teenager, or an adult, I strongly recommend picking this up. I went through a roller coaster of emotions in the second half of the book. I was on the verge of tears towards the end because it was so emotionally draining and my heart ached for both Eliza and Wallace – who, by the way is an absolute sweetheart!! Eliza and her Monsters sends a strong message of hope and to pursue your passion. Don’t waste your life doing things you loathe, make the most of your life!